例子: <change>
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2 The TEI Header
<!-- ... --><revisionDesc>
<change n="RCS:1.39" when="2007-08-08"
who="#jwernimo.lrv">Changed <val>drama.verse</val>
<gi>lg</gi>s to <gi>p</gi>s. <note>we have opened a discussion about the need for a new
value for <att>type</att> of <gi>lg</gi>, <val>drama.free.verse</val>, in order to address
the verse of Behn which is not in regular iambic pentameter. For the time being these
instances are marked with a comment note until we are able to fully consider the best way
to encode these instances.</note>
</change>
<change n="RCS:1.33" when="2007-06-28"
who="#pcaton.xzc">Added <att>key</att> and <att>reg</att>
to <gi>name</gi>s.</change>
<change n="RCS:1.31" when="2006-12-04"
who="#wgui.ner">Completed renovation. Validated.</change>
</revisionDesc>
<revisionDesc status="embargoed">
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#LB"> deleted chapter 10 </change>
</revisionDesc>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#LB"> deleted chapter 10 </change>
</revisionDesc>
<revisionDesc status="embargoed">
<change when="1991-11-11"> 王大明刪除第十章</change>
</revisionDesc>
<change when="1991-11-11"> 王大明刪除第十章</change>
</revisionDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title> ... </title>
<editor xml:id="LDB">Lou Burnard</editor>
<respStmt xml:id="BZ">
<resp>copy editing</resp>
<name>Brett Zamir</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<!-- ... -->
<revisionDesc status="published">
<change who="#BZ" when="2008-02-02"
status="public">Finished chapter 23</change>
<change who="#BZ" when="2008-01-02"
status="draft">Finished chapter 2</change>
<change n="P2.2" when="1991-12-21"
who="#LDB">Added examples to section 3</change>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#MSM">Deleted chapter 10</change>
</revisionDesc>
<title> ... </title>
<editor xml:id="LDB">Lou Burnard</editor>
<respStmt xml:id="BZ">
<resp>copy editing</resp>
<name>Brett Zamir</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<!-- ... -->
<revisionDesc status="published">
<change who="#BZ" when="2008-02-02"
status="public">Finished chapter 23</change>
<change who="#BZ" when="2008-01-02"
status="draft">Finished chapter 2</change>
<change n="P2.2" when="1991-12-21"
who="#LDB">Added examples to section 3</change>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#MSM">Deleted chapter 10</change>
</revisionDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="DRAFT1">First draft in pencil</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT2"
notBefore="1880-12-09">First revision, mostly
using green ink</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT3"
notBefore="1881-02-13">Final corrections as
supplied to printer.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="DRAFT1">First draft in pencil</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT2"
notBefore="1880-12-09">First revision, mostly
using green ink</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT3"
notBefore="1881-02-13">Final corrections as
supplied to printer.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title> ... </title>
<editor xml:id="fr_GK">G.K.</editor>
<respStmt xml:id="fr_RT">
<resp>copie</resp>
<name>R.T.</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<revisionDesc>
<change who="#fr_RT" when="2008-02-02">Fin du chapitre 23</change>
<change who="#fr_RT" when="2008-01-02">FIn du chapitre 2</change>
<change n="P2.2" when="1991-12-21"
who="#fr_GK">Ajout d'exemples dans la section 3</change>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#fr_MSM">Suppression du chapitre 10</change>
</revisionDesc>
<title> ... </title>
<editor xml:id="fr_GK">G.K.</editor>
<respStmt xml:id="fr_RT">
<resp>copie</resp>
<name>R.T.</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<revisionDesc>
<change who="#fr_RT" when="2008-02-02">Fin du chapitre 23</change>
<change who="#fr_RT" when="2008-01-02">FIn du chapitre 2</change>
<change n="P2.2" when="1991-12-21"
who="#fr_GK">Ajout d'exemples dans la section 3</change>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#fr_MSM">Suppression du chapitre 10</change>
</revisionDesc>
<change n="P2.2" when="1991-12-21">張三新增範例於第三節</change>
<change when="1991-11-11">李四刪除第十章</change>
<change when="1991-11-11">李四刪除第十章</change>
2.7 Minimal and Recommended Headers
<teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>Common sense, a machine-readable transcript</title>
<author>Paine, Thomas (1737-1809)</author>
<respStmt>
<resp>compiled by</resp>
<name>Jon K Adams</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<editionStmt>
<edition>
<date>1986</date>
</edition>
</editionStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>Oxford Text Archive.</distributor>
<address>
<addrLine>Oxford University Computing Services,</addrLine>
<addrLine>13 Banbury Road,</addrLine>
<addrLine>Oxford OX2 6RB,</addrLine>
<addrLine>UK</addrLine>
</address>
</publicationStmt>
<notesStmt>
<note>Brief notes on the text are in a
supplementary file.</note>
</notesStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<editor>Foner, Philip S.</editor>
<title>The collected writings of Thomas Paine</title>
<imprint>
<pubPlace>New York</pubPlace>
<publisher>Citadel Press</publisher>
<date>1945</date>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<encodingDesc>
<samplingDecl>
<p>Editorial notes in the Foner edition have not
been reproduced. </p>
<p>Blank lines and multiple blank spaces, including paragraph
indents, have not been preserved. </p>
</samplingDecl>
<editorialDecl>
<correction status="high"
method="silent">
<p>The following errors
in the Foner edition have been corrected:
<list>
<item>p. 13 l. 7 cotemporaries contemporaries</item>
<item>p. 28 l. 26 [comma] [period]</item>
<item>p. 84 l. 4 kin kind</item>
<item>p. 95 l. 1 stuggle struggle</item>
<item>p. 101 l. 4 certainy certainty</item>
<item>p. 167 l. 6 than that</item>
<item>p. 209 l. 24 publshed published</item>
</list>
</p>
</correction>
<normalization>
<p>No normalization beyond that performed
by Foner, if any. </p>
</normalization>
<quotation marks="all">
<p>All double quotation marks
rendered with ", all single quotation marks with
apostrophe. </p>
</quotation>
<hyphenation eol="none">
<p>Hyphenated words that appear at the
end of the line in the Foner edition have been reformed.</p>
</hyphenation>
<stdVals>
<p>The values of <att>when-iso</att> on the <gi>time</gi>
element always end in the format <val>HH:MM</val> or
<val>HH</val>; i.e., seconds, fractions thereof, and time
zone designators are not present.</p>
</stdVals>
<interpretation>
<p>Compound proper names are marked. </p>
<p>Dates are marked. </p>
<p>Italics are recorded without interpretation. </p>
</interpretation>
</editorialDecl>
<classDecl>
<taxonomy xml:id="lcsh">
<bibl>Library of Congress Subject Headings</bibl>
</taxonomy>
<taxonomy xml:id="lc">
<bibl>Library of Congress Classification</bibl>
</taxonomy>
</classDecl>
</encodingDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1774</date>
</creation>
<langUsage>
<language ident="en" usage="100">English.</language>
</langUsage>
<textClass>
<keywords scheme="#lcsh">
<term>Political science</term>
<term>United States -- Politics and government —
Revolution, 1775-1783</term>
</keywords>
<classCode scheme="#lc">JC 177</classCode>
</textClass>
</profileDesc>
<revisionDesc>
<change when="1996-01-22" who="#MSM"> finished proofreading </change>
<change when="1995-10-30" who="#LB"> finished proofreading </change>
<change notBefore="1995-07-04" who="#RG"> finished data entry at end of term </change>
<change notAfter="1995-01-01" who="#RG"> began data entry before New Year 1995 </change>
</revisionDesc>
</teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>Common sense, a machine-readable transcript</title>
<author>Paine, Thomas (1737-1809)</author>
<respStmt>
<resp>compiled by</resp>
<name>Jon K Adams</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<editionStmt>
<edition>
<date>1986</date>
</edition>
</editionStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>Oxford Text Archive.</distributor>
<address>
<addrLine>Oxford University Computing Services,</addrLine>
<addrLine>13 Banbury Road,</addrLine>
<addrLine>Oxford OX2 6RB,</addrLine>
<addrLine>UK</addrLine>
</address>
</publicationStmt>
<notesStmt>
<note>Brief notes on the text are in a
supplementary file.</note>
</notesStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<editor>Foner, Philip S.</editor>
<title>The collected writings of Thomas Paine</title>
<imprint>
<pubPlace>New York</pubPlace>
<publisher>Citadel Press</publisher>
<date>1945</date>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<encodingDesc>
<samplingDecl>
<p>Editorial notes in the Foner edition have not
been reproduced. </p>
<p>Blank lines and multiple blank spaces, including paragraph
indents, have not been preserved. </p>
</samplingDecl>
<editorialDecl>
<correction status="high"
method="silent">
<p>The following errors
in the Foner edition have been corrected:
<list>
<item>p. 13 l. 7 cotemporaries contemporaries</item>
<item>p. 28 l. 26 [comma] [period]</item>
<item>p. 84 l. 4 kin kind</item>
<item>p. 95 l. 1 stuggle struggle</item>
<item>p. 101 l. 4 certainy certainty</item>
<item>p. 167 l. 6 than that</item>
<item>p. 209 l. 24 publshed published</item>
</list>
</p>
</correction>
<normalization>
<p>No normalization beyond that performed
by Foner, if any. </p>
</normalization>
<quotation marks="all">
<p>All double quotation marks
rendered with ", all single quotation marks with
apostrophe. </p>
</quotation>
<hyphenation eol="none">
<p>Hyphenated words that appear at the
end of the line in the Foner edition have been reformed.</p>
</hyphenation>
<stdVals>
<p>The values of <att>when-iso</att> on the <gi>time</gi>
element always end in the format <val>HH:MM</val> or
<val>HH</val>; i.e., seconds, fractions thereof, and time
zone designators are not present.</p>
</stdVals>
<interpretation>
<p>Compound proper names are marked. </p>
<p>Dates are marked. </p>
<p>Italics are recorded without interpretation. </p>
</interpretation>
</editorialDecl>
<classDecl>
<taxonomy xml:id="lcsh">
<bibl>Library of Congress Subject Headings</bibl>
</taxonomy>
<taxonomy xml:id="lc">
<bibl>Library of Congress Classification</bibl>
</taxonomy>
</classDecl>
</encodingDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1774</date>
</creation>
<langUsage>
<language ident="en" usage="100">English.</language>
</langUsage>
<textClass>
<keywords scheme="#lcsh">
<term>Political science</term>
<term>United States -- Politics and government —
Revolution, 1775-1783</term>
</keywords>
<classCode scheme="#lc">JC 177</classCode>
</textClass>
</profileDesc>
<revisionDesc>
<change when="1996-01-22" who="#MSM"> finished proofreading </change>
<change when="1995-10-30" who="#LB"> finished proofreading </change>
<change notBefore="1995-07-04" who="#RG"> finished data entry at end of term </change>
<change notAfter="1995-01-01" who="#RG"> began data entry before New Year 1995 </change>
</revisionDesc>
</teiHeader>
1 The TEI Infrastructure
<revisionDesc status="published">
<change when="2010-10-21"
status="published"/>
<change when="2010-10-02" status="cleared"/>
<change when="2010-08-02"
status="embargoed"/>
<change when="2010-05-01" status="frozen"
who="#MSM"/>
<change when="2010-03-01" status="draft"
who="#LB"/>
</revisionDesc>
<change when="2010-10-21"
status="published"/>
<change when="2010-10-02" status="cleared"/>
<change when="2010-08-02"
status="embargoed"/>
<change when="2010-05-01" status="frozen"
who="#MSM"/>
<change when="2010-03-01" status="draft"
who="#LB"/>
</revisionDesc>
10 Manuscript Description
<msDesc>
<msIdentifier>
<country>France</country>
<settlement>Paris</settlement>
<repository xml:lang="fr">Bibliothèque nationale de France. Réserve des livres rares></repository>
<idno>RES P- YC- 1275</idno>
<!-- dans le cas des recueils : cote uniquement sans les sous-cotes -->
<altIdentifier>
<idno>Y. 1341</idno>
<note>Cote de la Bibliothèque royale au XVIIIe s. (Catalogue de 1750).</note>
</altIdentifier>
</msIdentifier>
<msContents>
<msItem>
<!-- pour le traitement des recueils la solution possible est de répéter l'élément <msItem> -->
<docAuthor>
<forename>Juvénal</forename>
</docAuthor>
<docAuthor>
<forename>Perse</forename>
</docAuthor>
<docTitle>
<titlePart type="main"/>
<titlePart type="sub"/>
</docTitle>
<docImprint>
<pubPlace>Venise</pubPlace>
<publisher>F. Torresani</publisher>
<!-- dans le Catalogue général: "in aedibus haeredum Aldi et Andreae soceri" -->
<publisher>G.-F. Torresani</publisher>
</docImprint>
<docDate when="1535">1535</docDate>
<note>In-8°.</note>
<!-- in-32°; in-24°; in-16°; in-8°; in-4°; in-folio; gr. folio -->
<note>Exemplaire avec rehauts peints en argent, or et bleu.</note>
<note>
<ref target="http://catalogue.bnf.fr/ark:/12148/cb31088624r">Notice bibliographique
dans le Catalogue général</ref>
</note>
</msItem>
</msContents>
<physDesc>
<p>
<ref target="http://bnf.fr/ark://">Image de la reliure dans l'iconothèque</ref>
<!-- RC-B-05225 (plat sup.) -->
</p>
<objectDesc>
<supportDesc>
<extent>
<dimensions type="binding">
<height unit="mm">170</height>
<width unit="mm">98</width>
<depth unit="mm">15</depth>
</dimensions>
</extent>
</supportDesc>
</objectDesc>
<bindingDesc>
<binding contemporary="true">
<p>
<index indexName="typo_reliure">
<term>Reliure à décor</term>
</index>
<index indexName="typo_decor">
<term>Entrelacs géométriques</term>
</index> Reliure en <material>maroquin</material> brun jaspé</p>
<decoNote type="plats"> à décor d’entrelacs géométriques (structure de losange et
rectangle) complété de fers évidés.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="plat_sup">Titre <q>ivvenalis. persivs</q> et ex-libris de Jean
Grolier <q>io. grolierii et amicorvm.</q> dorés respectivement au centre et au bas
du plat supérieur. </decoNote>
<decoNote type="plat_inf">Devise de Jean Grolier<q>portio mea sit in terra
viventivm</q> dorée au centre du plat inférieur.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="dos">Dos à cinq nerfs, sans décor ; simple filet doré sur chaque
nerf et en encadrement des caissons ; passages de chaînette marqués de même.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="tranchefiles">Tranchefiles simples unicolores, vert foncé.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="coupes">Filet doré sur les coupes.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="annexes"/>
<decoNote type="tranches">Tranches dorées.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="contreplats">Contreplats en vélin.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="chasses">Filet doré sur les chasses.</decoNote>
<!-- Description des gardes : gardes blanches ; gardes couleurs (marbrées, gaufrées, peintes, dominotées, etc.) généralement suivies de gardes blanches ; dans tous les cas, spécifier le nombre de gardes (début + fin du volume)-->
<decoNote type="gardes">Gardes en papier et vélin (2+1+2 / 2+1+2) ; filigrane au
pot.<ref>Briquet N° XX</ref>
</decoNote>
<!-- Élément qui inclut aussi bien des remarques sur la couture que les charnières, claies ou modes d'attaches des plats : tous éléments de la structure dont la description est jugée utile à la description et l'identification de la reliure-->
<decoNote type="structure">Defet manuscrit utilisé comme claie au contreplat
inférieur (visible par transparence, sous la contregarde en vélin).</decoNote>
<condition>Traces de mouillures anciennes plus ou moins importantes au bas des
feuillets, qui n'ont pas affecté la reliure ; éraflure en tête du plat
inférieur.</condition>
</binding>
</bindingDesc>
</physDesc>
<history>
<origin notBefore="1540-01-01"
notAfter="1547-09-15">
<p>Reliure exécutée pour Jean Grolier par Jean Picard, Paris, entre 1540 et 1547.</p>
</origin>
<provenance>
<p/>
</provenance>
<acquisition notBefore="1680-12-31"
notAfter="1724-12-31">Estampille n° 1, utilisée de
la fin du XVIIe siècle à 1724 (page de titre).</acquisition>
</history>
<additional>
<adminInfo>
<recordHist>
<source>Notice établie à partir du document original</source>
<change when="2009-10-05" who="Markova">Description mise à jour le <date type="crea">5 octobre 2009 </date>en vue de l'encodage en TEI des descriptions des reliure
de la Réserve des livres rares</change>
<change when="2009-06-01" who="Le Bars">Description revue le <date type="maj">1er
juin 2009 </date> par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
<change when="2009-06-25" who="Le Bars">Description validée le<date type="valid">25
juin 2009</date>par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
</recordHist>
</adminInfo>
</additional>
</msDesc>
<msIdentifier>
<country>France</country>
<settlement>Paris</settlement>
<repository xml:lang="fr">Bibliothèque nationale de France. Réserve des livres rares></repository>
<idno>RES P- YC- 1275</idno>
<!-- dans le cas des recueils : cote uniquement sans les sous-cotes -->
<altIdentifier>
<idno>Y. 1341</idno>
<note>Cote de la Bibliothèque royale au XVIIIe s. (Catalogue de 1750).</note>
</altIdentifier>
</msIdentifier>
<msContents>
<msItem>
<!-- pour le traitement des recueils la solution possible est de répéter l'élément <msItem> -->
<docAuthor>
<forename>Juvénal</forename>
</docAuthor>
<docAuthor>
<forename>Perse</forename>
</docAuthor>
<docTitle>
<titlePart type="main"/>
<titlePart type="sub"/>
</docTitle>
<docImprint>
<pubPlace>Venise</pubPlace>
<publisher>F. Torresani</publisher>
<!-- dans le Catalogue général: "in aedibus haeredum Aldi et Andreae soceri" -->
<publisher>G.-F. Torresani</publisher>
</docImprint>
<docDate when="1535">1535</docDate>
<note>In-8°.</note>
<!-- in-32°; in-24°; in-16°; in-8°; in-4°; in-folio; gr. folio -->
<note>Exemplaire avec rehauts peints en argent, or et bleu.</note>
<note>
<ref target="http://catalogue.bnf.fr/ark:/12148/cb31088624r">Notice bibliographique
dans le Catalogue général</ref>
</note>
</msItem>
</msContents>
<physDesc>
<p>
<ref target="http://bnf.fr/ark://">Image de la reliure dans l'iconothèque</ref>
<!-- RC-B-05225 (plat sup.) -->
</p>
<objectDesc>
<supportDesc>
<extent>
<dimensions type="binding">
<height unit="mm">170</height>
<width unit="mm">98</width>
<depth unit="mm">15</depth>
</dimensions>
</extent>
</supportDesc>
</objectDesc>
<bindingDesc>
<binding contemporary="true">
<p>
<index indexName="typo_reliure">
<term>Reliure à décor</term>
</index>
<index indexName="typo_decor">
<term>Entrelacs géométriques</term>
</index> Reliure en <material>maroquin</material> brun jaspé</p>
<decoNote type="plats"> à décor d’entrelacs géométriques (structure de losange et
rectangle) complété de fers évidés.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="plat_sup">Titre <q>ivvenalis. persivs</q> et ex-libris de Jean
Grolier <q>io. grolierii et amicorvm.</q> dorés respectivement au centre et au bas
du plat supérieur. </decoNote>
<decoNote type="plat_inf">Devise de Jean Grolier<q>portio mea sit in terra
viventivm</q> dorée au centre du plat inférieur.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="dos">Dos à cinq nerfs, sans décor ; simple filet doré sur chaque
nerf et en encadrement des caissons ; passages de chaînette marqués de même.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="tranchefiles">Tranchefiles simples unicolores, vert foncé.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="coupes">Filet doré sur les coupes.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="annexes"/>
<decoNote type="tranches">Tranches dorées.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="contreplats">Contreplats en vélin.</decoNote>
<decoNote type="chasses">Filet doré sur les chasses.</decoNote>
<!-- Description des gardes : gardes blanches ; gardes couleurs (marbrées, gaufrées, peintes, dominotées, etc.) généralement suivies de gardes blanches ; dans tous les cas, spécifier le nombre de gardes (début + fin du volume)-->
<decoNote type="gardes">Gardes en papier et vélin (2+1+2 / 2+1+2) ; filigrane au
pot.<ref>Briquet N° XX</ref>
</decoNote>
<!-- Élément qui inclut aussi bien des remarques sur la couture que les charnières, claies ou modes d'attaches des plats : tous éléments de la structure dont la description est jugée utile à la description et l'identification de la reliure-->
<decoNote type="structure">Defet manuscrit utilisé comme claie au contreplat
inférieur (visible par transparence, sous la contregarde en vélin).</decoNote>
<condition>Traces de mouillures anciennes plus ou moins importantes au bas des
feuillets, qui n'ont pas affecté la reliure ; éraflure en tête du plat
inférieur.</condition>
</binding>
</bindingDesc>
</physDesc>
<history>
<origin notBefore="1540-01-01"
notAfter="1547-09-15">
<p>Reliure exécutée pour Jean Grolier par Jean Picard, Paris, entre 1540 et 1547.</p>
</origin>
<provenance>
<p/>
</provenance>
<acquisition notBefore="1680-12-31"
notAfter="1724-12-31">Estampille n° 1, utilisée de
la fin du XVIIe siècle à 1724 (page de titre).</acquisition>
</history>
<additional>
<adminInfo>
<recordHist>
<source>Notice établie à partir du document original</source>
<change when="2009-10-05" who="Markova">Description mise à jour le <date type="crea">5 octobre 2009 </date>en vue de l'encodage en TEI des descriptions des reliure
de la Réserve des livres rares</change>
<change when="2009-06-01" who="Le Bars">Description revue le <date type="maj">1er
juin 2009 </date> par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
<change when="2009-06-25" who="Le Bars">Description validée le<date type="valid">25
juin 2009</date>par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
</recordHist>
</adminInfo>
</additional>
</msDesc>
<change when="2005-03-10">On 10 March 2005
<name>MJD</name> added provenance information</change>
<name>MJD</name> added provenance information</change>
<adminInfo>
<recordHist>
<source>Notice établie à partir du document original</source>
<change when="2009-10-05" who="Markova">Description mise à jour le <date type="crea">5
octobre 2009 </date>en vue de l'encodage en TEI des descriptions des reliure de la
Réserve des livres rares</change>
<change when="2009-06-01" who="Le Bars">Description revue le <date type="maj">1er juin
2009 </date> par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
<change when="2009-06-25" who="Le Bars">Description validée le<date type="valid">25
juin 2009</date>par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
</recordHist>
</adminInfo>
<recordHist>
<source>Notice établie à partir du document original</source>
<change when="2009-10-05" who="Markova">Description mise à jour le <date type="crea">5
octobre 2009 </date>en vue de l'encodage en TEI des descriptions des reliure de la
Réserve des livres rares</change>
<change when="2009-06-01" who="Le Bars">Description revue le <date type="maj">1er juin
2009 </date> par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
<change when="2009-06-25" who="Le Bars">Description validée le<date type="valid">25
juin 2009</date>par Fabienne Le Bars</change>
</recordHist>
</adminInfo>
<recordHist>
<source>
<p>Derived from <ref target="#IMEV">IMEV 123</ref> with additional research
by P.M.W.Robinson</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (editor)
checked examples against DTD version 3.6
</change>
</recordHist>
<source>
<p>Derived from <ref target="#IMEV">IMEV 123</ref> with additional research
by P.M.W.Robinson</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (editor)
checked examples against DTD version 3.6
</change>
</recordHist>
<recordHist>
<source>
<p>Derived from <ref target="#fr_IMEV">IMEV 123</ref> with additional research by
P.M.W.Robinson</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (editor) checked examples against DTD version
3.6 </change>
</recordHist>
<source>
<p>Derived from <ref target="#fr_IMEV">IMEV 123</ref> with additional research by
P.M.W.Robinson</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (editor) checked examples against DTD version
3.6 </change>
</recordHist>
<recordHist>
<source>
<p>源自<ref target="#IMEV">IMEV 123</ref>及P.M.W.羅賓森的附加研究。</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (編輯) 檢查不符DTD 3.6版本的範例</change>
</recordHist>
<source>
<p>源自<ref target="#IMEV">IMEV 123</ref>及P.M.W.羅賓森的附加研究。</p>
</source>
<change when="1999-06-23">
<name>LDB</name> (編輯) 檢查不符DTD 3.6版本的範例</change>
</recordHist>
11 Representation of Primary Sources
11.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
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<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="ST-1">First stage, written in ink </change>
<change xml:id="ST-2">Second stage, with revisions written in the author's hand
using pencil</change>
<change xml:id="ST-3">Fixation of the pencilled revisions together with further
revisions in the author's hand using ink</change>
<change xml:id="ST-4">Additions in a different hand, probably at a later
stage</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="ST-1">First stage, written in ink </change>
<change xml:id="ST-2">Second stage, with revisions written in the author's hand
using pencil</change>
<change xml:id="ST-3">Fixation of the pencilled revisions together with further
revisions in the author's hand using ink</change>
<change xml:id="ST-4">Additions in a different hand, probably at a later
stage</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
11.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="o">An unrelated change note</change>
<listChange xml:id="m">
<change xml:id="m1">Alterations on one manuscript page, certainly
related</change>
<change xml:id="m2">Alterations on another manuscript page, certainly
related</change>
</listChange>
<change xml:id="p">Another unrelated change note</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="o">An unrelated change note</change>
<listChange xml:id="m">
<change xml:id="m1">Alterations on one manuscript page, certainly
related</change>
<change xml:id="m2">Alterations on another manuscript page, certainly
related</change>
</listChange>
<change xml:id="p">Another unrelated change note</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
11.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="ST1">The first stage</change>
<listChange>
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<change xml:id="ST-rev1">A revision of the first stage</change>
<change xml:id="ST-rev2">Another revision of the first stage</change>
</listChange>
<change xml:id="STX">The last stage</change>
</listChange>
<change xml:id="ST1">The first stage</change>
<listChange>
<!-- We have no information about the order of these changes, except that they both followed ST1 and preceded STX -->
<change xml:id="ST-rev1">A revision of the first stage</change>
<change xml:id="ST-rev2">Another revision of the first stage</change>
</listChange>
<change xml:id="STX">The last stage</change>
</listChange>
11.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date notAfter="1816-07-18"/>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="mod1" when="1816-07-16">The first draft of
<title>Persuasion</title>, completed by the date <date>July 16 1816</date>
which is written after the word <q>Finis</q> at <ref target="#pers-30">page
30</ref>.</change>
<change xml:id="mod2"
notBefore="1816-07-16">After the <date>16th of July</date>
Austen starts revision of the two final chapters, by rewriting the end and
adding a new zone (<ref target="#transp-1">pages 32-35</ref>) to be inserted at
<ref target="#insertion-p1">page 19</ref>. This stage is documented by the
deletion of the date (<date>July 16 1816</date>) at <ref target="#pers-30">page
30</ref>, and the addition of more text and of a new date (<date>July 18.
1816</date>) at <ref target="#pers-31">page 31</ref>
</change>
<change notBefore="1816-07-18">Before publication, after <date>July 18th,
1816</date> chapters 10-11 were broken into three chapters, 10, 11, 12, as
witnessed by the print.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<date notAfter="1816-07-18"/>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="mod1" when="1816-07-16">The first draft of
<title>Persuasion</title>, completed by the date <date>July 16 1816</date>
which is written after the word <q>Finis</q> at <ref target="#pers-30">page
30</ref>.</change>
<change xml:id="mod2"
notBefore="1816-07-16">After the <date>16th of July</date>
Austen starts revision of the two final chapters, by rewriting the end and
adding a new zone (<ref target="#transp-1">pages 32-35</ref>) to be inserted at
<ref target="#insertion-p1">page 19</ref>. This stage is documented by the
deletion of the date (<date>July 16 1816</date>) at <ref target="#pers-30">page
30</ref>, and the addition of more text and of a new date (<date>July 18.
1816</date>) at <ref target="#pers-31">page 31</ref>
</change>
<change notBefore="1816-07-18">Before publication, after <date>July 18th,
1816</date> chapters 10-11 were broken into three chapters, 10, 11, 12, as
witnessed by the print.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
11.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change target="#zone_1 #subst_3">First stage, written in ink by a
scribe</change>
<change target="#zone_2 #mod_1 #line_1 #line_2 #subst_1 #subst_2 #subst_4 #delSpan_1">Revised by Goethe using pencil</change>
<change target="#redo_1 #redo_2 #redo_3 #subst_1 #subst_2 #delSpan_1 #add_1">Fixation of the revised passages and further revisions by Goethe using
ink</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<sourceDoc>
<surface>
<zone xml:id="zone_1">
<line xml:id="line_1">
<handShift new="#g_bl"/>
<retrace hand="#g_t" xml:id="redo_1">Nun</retrace>
</line>
<line>
<handShift new="#jo_t"/>Ihr wanſtige Schuften mit den Feuerbacken</line>
<line xml:id="line_2">
<handShift new="#g_bl"/>
<retrace hand="#g_t" xml:id="redo_2">feiſt</retrace>
</line>
<line>Ihr glüht ſo recht vom Höllen Schwefel ſatt.</line> [...] </zone>
</surface>
</sourceDoc>
<text>
<body>
<l n="11656">
<subst xml:id="subst_1">
<del>Ihr</del>
<add>Nun</add>
</subst> wanſtige Schuften mit den Feuerbacken</l>
<l n="11657">Ihr glüht ſo recht vom Höllen Schwefel <subst xml:id="subst_2">
<del>ſatt</del>
<add>feiſt</add>
</subst>.</l>
</body>
</text>
<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change target="#zone_1 #subst_3">First stage, written in ink by a
scribe</change>
<change target="#zone_2 #mod_1 #line_1 #line_2 #subst_1 #subst_2 #subst_4 #delSpan_1">Revised by Goethe using pencil</change>
<change target="#redo_1 #redo_2 #redo_3 #subst_1 #subst_2 #delSpan_1 #add_1">Fixation of the revised passages and further revisions by Goethe using
ink</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<sourceDoc>
<surface>
<zone xml:id="zone_1">
<line xml:id="line_1">
<handShift new="#g_bl"/>
<retrace hand="#g_t" xml:id="redo_1">Nun</retrace>
</line>
<line>
<handShift new="#jo_t"/>Ihr wanſtige Schuften mit den Feuerbacken</line>
<line xml:id="line_2">
<handShift new="#g_bl"/>
<retrace hand="#g_t" xml:id="redo_2">feiſt</retrace>
</line>
<line>Ihr glüht ſo recht vom Höllen Schwefel ſatt.</line> [...] </zone>
</surface>
</sourceDoc>
<text>
<body>
<l n="11656">
<subst xml:id="subst_1">
<del>Ihr</del>
<add>Nun</add>
</subst> wanſtige Schuften mit den Feuerbacken</l>
<l n="11657">Ihr glüht ſo recht vom Höllen Schwefel <subst xml:id="subst_2">
<del>ſatt</del>
<add>feiſt</add>
</subst>.</l>
</body>
</text>
<revisionDesc>
<listChange>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#LB"> deleted chapter 10 </change>
<change when="1991-11-02" who="#MSM"> completed first draft </change>
</listChange>
</revisionDesc>
<listChange>
<change when="1991-11-11" who="#LB"> deleted chapter 10 </change>
<change when="1991-11-02" who="#MSM"> completed first draft </change>
</listChange>
</revisionDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="CHG-1">First stage, written in ink by a writer</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-2">Second stage, written in Goethe's hand using pencil</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-3">Fixation of the revised passages and further revisions by
Goethe using ink</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-4">Addition of another stanza in a different hand,
probably at a later stage</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange ordered="true">
<change xml:id="CHG-1">First stage, written in ink by a writer</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-2">Second stage, written in Goethe's hand using pencil</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-3">Fixation of the revised passages and further revisions by
Goethe using ink</change>
<change xml:id="CHG-4">Addition of another stanza in a different hand,
probably at a later stage</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>